Jackson in particular seems to have flourished with this style, and is most powerful when she employs it. She whips out a breathy manner reminiscent of the Persian ghazal, using the pause to generate power, the syncopated beat of the existence/non-existence of words generating an emotional response. It is a remarkably elegant and serene kind of poetry. Rules of grammar, punctuation and syntax are wiped out in favour of a sort of absolute smoothness that glides over the mind like a clear stream of water: "You stand in the rounded doorway / your arms upward / the walls freshly painted blue / a you aquarium / stomach wet and / blue you swim thinking / in the blue doorway." Sometimes Jackson pursues this device too far, reducing her poetry past the point of pure elegance and into a chopped word salad instead. But overall, this is a pretty piece of art.                      
                                                               

The Desmond Road Book of the Dead by Clare Latremouille (Chaudiere Books), 216 pp.

The Desmond Road Book of the Dead is a proud and fascinating piece of work. Latremouille weaves a delicately complex web of poetic words around the frame of a traditional novel. It is mostly beautiful, though also difficult for this poetic prose to remain consistently compelling over the entire novel - sometimes she misses the mark entirely, as in this inadvertently hilarious description of a cat's death: "At the very end, the aged mound breathed only in bunches, yet not quite infrequently enough for burial." She has a hugely impressive talent, but lacks the subtlety that long years of practice would provide in order to make this into something great. But that's hardly a criticism for an author at the beginning of her career. So despite this, the book is reeeal good.

Two stockings, two feet, two books! Merry Christmas!                                                                

 
 

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